Melissa
Writes About Summer
By Valerie L. Egar
“Mom,
Dad! Do you want to hear what I wrote?”
Melissa called.
Ms. Phillips, her
teacher, had asked the class to use their imaginations and write about summer.
“Think about the things you like about summer,” she said. “Then think— if
summer could make sounds, what would they be? What colors do you think of when
you think about summer?” Melissa thought
and thought. She spent most of Sunday writing:
The Colors of Summer
Summer is red. Hot sun, glowing red. Red
plastic beach pail and shovel to dig in the sand. Red convertible cruising with
its top down. Sweet red strawberries on Grandma’s
pound cake, topped with whipped cream. Red cherries, piled high. My fingers
juicy red from picking raspberries with Mom. Red Sox games! Summer is red.
Summer is green. Shaded woods, green
leaves lifting in a breeze. Green scent of cut grass. Hummingbird buzzing in
the bee balm. A picnic at my cousin’s with a green striped watermelon my Uncle
Bob grew. Caterpillar hiding in weeds. Green frogs plop, plop, plop in the lake
when I step near. Summer is green.
Summer is blue. Bluebird flying in
the meadow, sitting on a fence. Dad paddling a blue canoe across the lake with
me in front. Clear blue sky, no clouds.
Blue dragonfly on a lily pad. Crackle of lightning— electric blue—
across the sky. Blue water: our neighbor’s pool, the lake by Grandma, the
ocean. My toenails painted blue for
everyone to see. Summer is blue.
Orange? Summer is bright with
orange. Popsicles and sherbet. Flaming
sunsets. The evening campfire where we
sit, looking at the flames, roasting
marshmallows, and telling stories. Monarch
butterflies in the garden. Tiger lilies growing next to the road on the way to
my cousin’s house. Summer is orange.
Summer didn’t leave yellow out. Fireflies blinking at twilight. Fields of
sunflowers. Ears of corns, yellow and sweet,
dripping with butter. My flip-flops and my favorite pair of shorts. The bright spot of yellow at the center of a daisy. Summer is yellow.
dripping with butter. My flip-flops and my favorite pair of shorts. The bright spot of yellow at the center of a daisy. Summer is yellow.
And, my favorite—purple. I don’t
know why people call blueberries blue, because they are really purple. I love
blueberries and I like picking them with Mom and Dad. Mom makes blueberry pie
and blueberry jam and she freezes bags and bags of them for winter. When she
makes a blueberry pie in January, every bite tastes like a warm August day.
“Wow,”
said Dad.
“That
is beautiful,” said Mom. “I could never
write something like that.”
Ms.
Phillips asked Melissa to read her composition to the class. At first she felt
shy, but when she saw people start to smile, she relaxed and read on. When she
finished, the class clapped.
Ms.
Phillips talked to Melissa after lunch. “You are a talented writer,” she said.
“Not everyone sees things the way you do and not everyone can express what they
see and feel with words. You might want to think about becoming a writer.”
A
writer! Melissa thrilled to the idea
that she might be able to write stories and books like the ones she enjoyed
reading. It was something wonderful to dream about and she carried the idea
close to her heart as she grew.
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Copyright 2017 by Valerie L. Egar. May not be copied or reproduced without permission from the author.
Published July 2, 2017, Journal Tribune Sunday (Biddeford, ME).
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Published July 2, 2017, Journal Tribune Sunday (Biddeford, ME).
Val: as usual - wonderfully descriptive and vivid. Love your stories
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